Zejm's Doggy park for dogs:)

 

Hello ,we meet over and over and over again.This is my writing that I did with my sister and I also did the picture with my sister. Have you made an ideal park before? blog ya Later people:) bye bye 

Volcano writing by Zejm

 

Hi people that are looking at my blog,this is the writing that I did with my dad and my sister. I really liked it because it was so fun to do more stuff about volcanoes. Do you know some names of volcanoes? Blog ya later people:)

Zejm's man eating devil writing :)

 

Here is my "Man eating devil writing." that I did with a little help from my big sister. I had to to write about volcano's so I did a Man eating devil writing so it can look more inspiring to my blog.Have you ever wrote about a man eating devil before? blog ya Later:)

Zejm's Auckland and beyond Writing:)

 

Hi people, this is my writing that I did with my sister and my brother. This is my writing to tell you about me and what I like to smell and what is favorite view in Auckland:) What things do you like to smell and what your favorite view is in Auckland? blog ya Later. :) :)

Do all volcanoes look the same?

 Here is my"Do all Volcano's look the same?" writing that i did with some help of my family:)

There is a link to The Battle of the Mountains story we have been learning about on my slides. Can you still remember how to tell the story?

Zejm's Volcano Writing :)

Hello people that are looking through my blog, here is my blog post about" Do all Volcano's look the same?" slide that I did with the help of my family.Do you think all the look the same? blog ya Later:) Zejm:)

The best Rocket ship Writing ever:) (so much writing):) fantastic

 Coin Operated

Coin Operated Link (watch before writing)

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Write 6 sentences that detail who the story is about, where the story is set, what problem/conflict happens in the story, how they handle the problem, how the problem is solved and how the characters change.

Sentence 1 (character/scene)	One late morning, there was a young boy about six named Michael walking with his mum through the city. The boy was flying his rocket ship that he made while walking with his mum.
Sentence 2 (character/scene)	Suddenly the boy saw a bigger toy rocket ship bigger than his toy one. He got on and sat down  then he  got a coin and threw it into the twisty thingy.
Sentence 3 (Conflict)	When the boy hopped on to the rocket he pushed the button and he just rumbled.
Sentence 4 (Conflict)	Then the boy got off and threw his space helmet off on the ground to discuss.
Sentence 5 (resolution)	The  boy checked his pocket for more money but then there was no more.
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed)	The boy built a lemonade stand to get more money for the rocket ship.The boy was about 70 something and he was still there. One day he was walking home and he  saw the rocket so he opened his sack and  poured the money into the money thingy. Then he got  on and wished him luck to make it move all the way. So then he saw the  button and  pressed it but then it didn’t do anything…. Soon it started to rumble and blast off. The rocket flew into the sky with the boy in it and that’s the story of the Coin Operated rocket ship.

Now write a 100 word story that includes all the details above

One busy morning, there was a young boy about six named Michael walking with his mum through the city. The boy was zooming his toy rocket ship while darting around his Mum.Suddenly the boy saw a bigger toy rocket ship bigger than his toy one. He got on and sat down  then he  got a coin and threw it into the twisty thing.When the boy hopped on to the rocket he pushed the button and he just rumbled.Then the boy got off and threw his space helmet off on the ground to discuss/gloomy.The  boy checked his pocket for more money but then there was no more. The boy built a lemonade stand to get more money for the rocket ship.The boy was about 70 something and he was still there. One day Micheal was walking home and then Micheal saw the rocket so then he opened his sack and  poured the money into the money thingy. Then he got  on and wished him luck to make it move all the way. So then he saw the  button and  pressed it but then it didn’t do anything…. Soon it started to rumble and blast off. The rocket flew into the sky with the boy in it and that’s the story of the Coin Operated rocket ship.

To find out how many words your story is Highlight your writing and press CTRL + SHIFT + C (or go to Tools and click word count)

Hello most interested fellows, this is my best writing yet. You can see  that we had to write a 100 word story about the coin operated ship and the young boy. The story is about a boy and his mum are walking through the city to get some stuff. And the rest is for you to find out😍. Blog ya Later fellow people:) bye bye😀

Zejm-The Magnificent Present Writing

 he Present Wk1/2

Video Link (watch before writing)

Thesaurus

Write 6 sentences that detail who the story is about, where the story is set, what problem/conflict happens in the story, how they handle the problem, how the problem is solved and how the characters change.

Sentence 1 (character/scene)	One beautiful sunset afternoon a mum comes home and  hands the boy a present. Then the blinds open and then his mum goes on the phone and the boy opens the box.
Sentence 2 (character/scene)	The boy opens the  box and sees a puppy  inside the box. Then the puppy jumps on the boy and then  the boy sees that the  puppy has a missing leg.
Sentence 3 (Conflict)	The boy throws the puppy on the ground and then the boy goes back on his game. Then the puppy sees a red ball then the puppy gets up and runs towards it. Then when the puppy runs he runs into the cupboard hitting his head.
Sentence 4 (Conflict)	When the puppy hits his head he shakes his head and then crawls under and gets the ball. When he gets the ball he takes it to the boy and sits  down and waits for him to throw it.  Then  the boy kicked it into the box that the puppy came in and then the puppy ran into the box, hiding  the dog.
Sentence 5 (resolution)	Then the boy yells to his mum “ we'll be outside and the dog goes outside and plays fetch going up and down the front yard.
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed)	At the beginning the boy didn’t  like the dog because it had a missing leg like him. But then he starts to realize that he can still have positive energy too.

Now write a 100 word story that includes all the details above

One sunny  afternoon🌞 ,a boy glued to the couch playing on his x box was playing a video🎮 game when his mother came home with a present in her hands. When the mother👩 gave the boy the present, he didn’t want to get off his game. Then he opens the box and jumps the puppy on to the boy, then he sees that the 🐕puppy has a missing leg. Then the boy throws the puppy on to the floor and goes back on his game, then when the boy throws the puppy on the floor, then the  puppy sees a red 🔴ball and goes to get it. When the  puppy gets the ball, all of his energy makes him crash💥 into the cupboard.Then the puppy crawls under the cupboard and grabs the big bouncy red  ball and carries it to the boy. When the puppy carries it to the boy, the boy kicked it into the box and the puppy ran to it, failing and falling but eventually the puppy ran into the box🟫 making it hard for the puppy to see. When the puppy  runs back he gives the big round red ball to the young boy and then the puppy runs to the ball  and then brings it back to the boy.Then the boy  throws it back making the puppy run to the ball. When the puppy falls over, the boy grunts and doesn't care. Then the boy logs off the game and calls to his mother “ We're going outside🌄”Then they go outside and play fetch all day long and that's the story of the present. 🟫

To find out how many words your story is Highlight your writing and press CTRL + SHIFT + C (or go to Tools and click word count)

Here is my Present Writing me and my class did. 

Here is the Video so you can write your own story about the Present.