Friday 13 August 2021

The best Rocket ship Writing ever:) (so much writing):) fantastic

 Coin Operated

Coin Operated Link (watch before writing)


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Write 6 sentences that detail who the story is about, where the story is set, what problem/conflict happens in the story, how they handle the problem, how the problem is solved and how the characters change.

Sentence 1

(character/scene)

One late morning, there was a young boy about six named Michael walking with his mum through the city. The boy was flying his rocket ship that he made while walking with his mum.

Sentence 2

(character/scene)

Suddenly the boy saw a bigger toy rocket ship bigger than his toy one. He got on and sat down  then he  got a coin and threw it into the twisty thingy.

Sentence 3

(Conflict)

When the boy hopped on to the rocket he pushed the button and he just rumbled.

Sentence 4

(Conflict)

Then the boy got off and threw his space helmet off on the ground to discuss.

Sentence 5

(resolution)

The  boy checked his pocket for more money but then there was no more. 

Sentence 6

(how characters have changed)

The boy built a lemonade stand to get more money for the rocket ship.The boy was about 70 something and he was still there. One day he was walking home and he  saw the rocket so he opened his sack and  poured the money into the money thingy. Then he got  on and wished him luck to make it move all the way. So then he saw the  button and  pressed it but then it didn’t do anything…. Soon it started to rumble and blast off. The rocket flew into the sky with the boy in it and that’s the story of the Coin Operated rocket ship.



Now write a 100 word story that includes all the details above

One busy morning, there was a young boy about six named Michael walking with his mum through the city. The boy was zooming his toy rocket ship while darting around his Mum.Suddenly the boy saw a bigger toy rocket ship bigger than his toy one. He got on and sat down  then he  got a coin and threw it into the twisty thing.When the boy hopped on to the rocket he pushed the button and he just rumbled.Then the boy got off and threw his space helmet off on the ground to discuss/gloomy.The  boy checked his pocket for more money but then there was no more. The boy built a lemonade stand to get more money for the rocket ship.The boy was about 70 something and he was still there. One day Micheal was walking home and then Micheal saw the rocket so then he opened his sack and  poured the money into the money thingy. Then he got  on and wished him luck to make it move all the way. So then he saw the  button and  pressed it but then it didn’t do anything…. Soon it started to rumble and blast off. The rocket flew into the sky with the boy in it and that’s the story of the Coin Operated rocket ship.

To find out how many words your story is Highlight your writing and press CTRL + SHIFT + C (or go to Tools and click word count)


Hello most interested fellows, this is my best writing yet. You can see  that we had to write a 100 word story about the coin operated ship and the young boy. The story is about a boy and his mum are walking through the city to get some stuff. And the rest is for you to find out😍. Blog ya Later fellow people:) bye bye😀

1 comment:

  1. Hi Zejm, you have some very detailed parts to your planning at the end!! Some of the words you have used are great eg...rumble and blast, zooming and darting...good thinking!

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