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HI this si my haiku that I did with the help of my big sister. The haiku is about a volcanic eruption. Did you do any volcanic eruption slides? blog ya later:)
Kia Ora Zejm, great job on your volcano haiku! It is quite hard to keep to the syllable limit, but you nailed it! Great imagery too - I got a picture of a volcano in my mind as I read it! Well done.
Kia Ora Zejm, great job on your volcano haiku! It is quite hard to keep to the syllable limit, but you nailed it! Great imagery too - I got a picture of a volcano in my mind as I read it! Well done.
ReplyDeletehey zemj great job on the work but I Think a bit more work.
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