Tuesday 7 September 2021

Zejms Volcano facts writing:)

Hi bloggers,this is the writing that I did with my dad. You can see that some of the  boxes in the adjectives boxes that some are empty because I do not know what to put it in? Blog ya Later bloggers:)

2 comments:

  1. Mālō e lelei Zejm, your slide has great information, I really like the photos you have chosen as they are really clear. It sounds like you have done lots of good learning.

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  2. Mālō e lelei Zejm, you and your Dad have worked really hard on these wonderful slides! Perhaps you could think about describing the lava flow on slide 8. You could add adjectives that describe the colour of the lava and adjectives that describe the heat or even the sound of the eruption. Blog you later, Megan : )

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