The best Rocket ship Writing ever:) (so much writing):) fantastic

 Coin Operated

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Write 6 sentences that detail who the story is about, where the story is set, what problem/conflict happens in the story, how they handle the problem, how the problem is solved and how the characters change.

Sentence 1 (character/scene)	One late morning, there was a young boy about six named Michael walking with his mum through the city. The boy was flying his rocket ship that he made while walking with his mum.
Sentence 2 (character/scene)	Suddenly the boy saw a bigger toy rocket ship bigger than his toy one. He got on and sat down  then he  got a coin and threw it into the twisty thingy.
Sentence 3 (Conflict)	When the boy hopped on to the rocket he pushed the button and he just rumbled.
Sentence 4 (Conflict)	Then the boy got off and threw his space helmet off on the ground to discuss.
Sentence 5 (resolution)	The  boy checked his pocket for more money but then there was no more.
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed)	The boy built a lemonade stand to get more money for the rocket ship.The boy was about 70 something and he was still there. One day he was walking home and he  saw the rocket so he opened his sack and  poured the money into the money thingy. Then he got  on and wished him luck to make it move all the way. So then he saw the  button and  pressed it but then it didn’t do anything…. Soon it started to rumble and blast off. The rocket flew into the sky with the boy in it and that’s the story of the Coin Operated rocket ship.

Now write a 100 word story that includes all the details above

One busy morning, there was a young boy about six named Michael walking with his mum through the city. The boy was zooming his toy rocket ship while darting around his Mum.Suddenly the boy saw a bigger toy rocket ship bigger than his toy one. He got on and sat down  then he  got a coin and threw it into the twisty thing.When the boy hopped on to the rocket he pushed the button and he just rumbled.Then the boy got off and threw his space helmet off on the ground to discuss/gloomy.The  boy checked his pocket for more money but then there was no more. The boy built a lemonade stand to get more money for the rocket ship.The boy was about 70 something and he was still there. One day Micheal was walking home and then Micheal saw the rocket so then he opened his sack and  poured the money into the money thingy. Then he got  on and wished him luck to make it move all the way. So then he saw the  button and  pressed it but then it didn’t do anything…. Soon it started to rumble and blast off. The rocket flew into the sky with the boy in it and that’s the story of the Coin Operated rocket ship.

To find out how many words your story is Highlight your writing and press CTRL + SHIFT + C (or go to Tools and click word count)

Hello most interested fellows, this is my best writing yet. You can see  that we had to write a 100 word story about the coin operated ship and the young boy. The story is about a boy and his mum are walking through the city to get some stuff. And the rest is for you to find out😍. Blog ya Later fellow people:) bye bye😀

Zejm-The Magnificent Present Writing

 he Present Wk1/2

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Write 6 sentences that detail who the story is about, where the story is set, what problem/conflict happens in the story, how they handle the problem, how the problem is solved and how the characters change.

Sentence 1 (character/scene)	One beautiful sunset afternoon a mum comes home and  hands the boy a present. Then the blinds open and then his mum goes on the phone and the boy opens the box.
Sentence 2 (character/scene)	The boy opens the  box and sees a puppy  inside the box. Then the puppy jumps on the boy and then  the boy sees that the  puppy has a missing leg.
Sentence 3 (Conflict)	The boy throws the puppy on the ground and then the boy goes back on his game. Then the puppy sees a red ball then the puppy gets up and runs towards it. Then when the puppy runs he runs into the cupboard hitting his head.
Sentence 4 (Conflict)	When the puppy hits his head he shakes his head and then crawls under and gets the ball. When he gets the ball he takes it to the boy and sits  down and waits for him to throw it.  Then  the boy kicked it into the box that the puppy came in and then the puppy ran into the box, hiding  the dog.
Sentence 5 (resolution)	Then the boy yells to his mum “ we'll be outside and the dog goes outside and plays fetch going up and down the front yard.
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed)	At the beginning the boy didn’t  like the dog because it had a missing leg like him. But then he starts to realize that he can still have positive energy too.

Now write a 100 word story that includes all the details above

One sunny  afternoon🌞 ,a boy glued to the couch playing on his x box was playing a video🎮 game when his mother came home with a present in her hands. When the mother👩 gave the boy the present, he didn’t want to get off his game. Then he opens the box and jumps the puppy on to the boy, then he sees that the 🐕puppy has a missing leg. Then the boy throws the puppy on to the floor and goes back on his game, then when the boy throws the puppy on the floor, then the  puppy sees a red 🔴ball and goes to get it. When the  puppy gets the ball, all of his energy makes him crash💥 into the cupboard.Then the puppy crawls under the cupboard and grabs the big bouncy red  ball and carries it to the boy. When the puppy carries it to the boy, the boy kicked it into the box and the puppy ran to it, failing and falling but eventually the puppy ran into the box🟫 making it hard for the puppy to see. When the puppy  runs back he gives the big round red ball to the young boy and then the puppy runs to the ball  and then brings it back to the boy.Then the boy  throws it back making the puppy run to the ball. When the puppy falls over, the boy grunts and doesn't care. Then the boy logs off the game and calls to his mother “ We're going outside🌄”Then they go outside and play fetch all day long and that's the story of the present. 🟫

To find out how many words your story is Highlight your writing and press CTRL + SHIFT + C (or go to Tools and click word count)

Here is my Present Writing me and my class did. 

Here is the Video so you can write your own story about the Present. 

My Matariki Slide!

 

This is my Matariki Writing me and my class did. We did all the genders of the stars and who they are associated with. happy matariki everyone!

Zejm's Super Legend of Wairaka

This is my post about Wairaka writing me and my class did. I did heaps of Writing, you can see all the Writing at the bottom, I really liked the Wairaka Writing because we had to describe Wairaka with these words... Bold, Brave, Positive and showing manaakitanga. Have fun reading my Writing:)

The legend of Wairaka One summer day a waka arrived at a beautiful beach.All the men went to the beach to look for some food for the tribe and to see if it was safe. When the men were searching for the food a huge storm started to appear. The dark stormy grey wind was going to capsize the waka, the women were screaming and the children were crying so badly that the waka floated away.the waka was about to hit the jagged rocks they were about to hit. The big huge juicy floppy raindrops were so annoying they couldn't concentrate on what they were doing. Wairaka had a courageous decision: she had to pick up the paddle or they would be dead so she was brave, mighty and positive. Wairaka Called to her ancestors and yelled KIA WHAKATANE AU I AHAU. She called to her ancestors loudly and bravely, she got the tapu(sacred) paddle and with one mighty push she and her iwi ended up surviving the conflict. You can go to Whakatane and see the statue of wairaka and climb the rock she’s on but you should go at low tide because the water makes it slippery. 

Begging:There was a waka that arrived at a beautiful beach after paddling for three month’s. The men got off the waka to see if the beach had food and fresh water for the tribe so they wouldn't stay thirsty and starve. After the men got off the waka the waka started to rock out to the scary big enormous sea. 

Problem: Wairaka and her tribe were in a horrible storm that had lightning like glycerin that had been spotted around the sky . The Waka about to hit the jagged rocks and the waka could have drafted to the middle of the sea. Wairaka hadone decision: be brave and use the paddle? Wairaka chose to use the paddle and push them to the surface of the beach. Wairaka had to push them to the surface before they draft out to the mighty and scary sea. Wairaka pushed them to the surface of the beach and they survived the conflict. 

 The End of the story:Exhausted, Wairaka had to do something and that something was to touch the tapu paddle but the women were not allowed to touch the paddle because it was tapu. So then Wairaka got the paddle and with one mighty push they were safely on the shore. Wairaka and her tribe stayed at the beach and that’s how the town of Whakatane was named. You can go see Wairaka on the rock at Whakatane and you can also climb the rock but maybe not when it is slippery. Wairaka went on for many adventures but those are for another time. Do you know 

Wairaka? can't wait to see your  comment's!

The Fresh + Smooth Show Writing

  This is my Fresh+ Smooth Show writing me and my class did. You can see we look like oranges with yellow hats but the hats aren't actually yellow i think  it's just the color looks bright . well that not what we are we are actually krill and WHALE EAT KRILL. 

The colossal Troll Writing

 The troll stomped down the street like two colliding rock's. He had a nose that looks like  size of six gorillas and teeth like never before.  His body was covered in grass that looked like hair he  never shaved off. 

 

 This is our Colossal Troll Writing me and my class did with Mrs Judd. I really liked it because because we had to  describe it. You  can see little tiny people that are running away from the horrible beast. 

one scary October night during winter writing

 One scary winter night in October. And it was in taupo where me and my family where moving to.when we got there I saw   bloody red   widows that were actually Just red carpet curtains. I was unpacking my my stuff when I heard a scream down in the basement. I wanted to go look  but i didn't ‘ after i was done unpacking my stuff i went into the kitchen to find that there was a… mess in the kitchen. All the plates where smashed and broken one of the pots were leaking egg yolk all over the floor. It looked as if it a tornado happened during a tsunami.  

this is my spooky writing i did with my class and Mrs  Judd. we had to describe the picture and add bits of fantastical words.